Writing

Walt: We are learning to write a Fairytale! Structure: Introduce the topic and the characters. Tell the problem and pop up other little ones on the way. Finish the story with a happy or sad ending.
 * Introduction: **
 * Problem and Seres of events: **
 * Conclusion: **

My Fairytale:

Once upon a time there lived seven wild little squirrels who loved each other very well. They lived in a big hole in a The three trees near the river. Their mother Loved them dearly and looked after them with great care. She was a very good teacher and tort the kids that when she was out they must stay inside their homes at all times. Then one day the mother had to go into the woods on the other side of the river to get some food for the children, because she was running very low on her acorns. So before she left she gathered the squirrels up in her house and told them “The hunter is up and going this morning and if you go outside he will shoot you with his Bow and Arrows and eat you up with his wife and two children”. Then the mother hopped out of the hole and skittered down the tree and left the squirrels to fend for themselves.

After a couple of minutes after the mother left the hunter came strolling by and he heard the little squirrels talking to each other on the phone so before he would shoot them he waited. He made his way slowly and soundlessly up the 1st tree and said to the hole “Squeak, i have come home Squeak!” He tried his hardest to sound like the squirrel’s Mother but his voice was to hard and it frightened the squirrel. The squirrel stopped talking for a second. “Squeak, You can’t be, my mother has a sweet and innocent voice, You must be the HUNTER!” he Squeaked back. “Go away and find something else to shoot” So the hunter left for home still with an empty game bag and came back the next day with his axe which he were to cut down the tree and shoot the squirrel with his Bow and Arrows. He made his way to the 1st tree again and saw that he was in bed so he got his axe out a started to chop the tree down as silently as he could. CRACK! The tree falls down for a start and then there was silence and the squirrel hopped out of the house still half asleep and saw the hunter. Before he could run away the arrow pierced his eye and he fell down dead.After his death the mother came back with the acorns and was on her way to her house when she noticed the fallen tree. She dropped her mouth opened wide. She dropped her acorns and ran to the tree only to find a puddle of blood. She got the stuff from his house and went away.

Then the hunter tried the second tree but the mother was home giving the squirrel the box of stuff the brother squirrel had owned. The squirrel started to cry as he opened the box which held his brothers shoes that had been carved out of pine wood. At that moment he got out his BOW and ARROWS and shot the brother to the ground. As soon as the brother was killed the mother skipped out of the tree and hid in the bushes that were underneath But the hunter was very smart and had set up some snares at the bottom just in case the squirrel ran away and the mothers tail got ripped off and she lay there waiting for the death hit but it never came so she got up and slowly, wobbly made her way to her sons house. When she got there her son was still in bed watching the Chipmunks. So she shouted at him “Get up! and set a trap because the hunter is on his way to this tree and if so you will be shot with his bow and arrows” So they came up with a PLAN.

“Christmas, Christmas time is here, time for joy and...” The hunter noticed the song it was coming from the third tree so he got up and started to climb then he noticed that his hands were sticking to the tree as he climbed then suddenly he moved his hand up and when he placed it down it was stuck. He could just get a glimpse of the squirrels house he caught sight of the TV with the Chipmunks playing a he realized he was being tricked. “I’ll get you one day you stupid squirrels, oh i will” he shouted. Then it came to dark and he could not get off the tree so he slept with his back hanging out and a chill running up his spine.

“Chirp” The call of the morning bird awakes the hunter from his sleep. He must have fallen down because he is on the ground with bleeding hands and a twisted ankle. He gets up and starts to limp back to the tree then before he even thinks of starting to climb he gets a stick and scrapes of the sticky stuff and feels it then just to make sure he is right he takes a bite and the bitter taste envelopes in his mouth he was right the sticky stuff is Sap. But he keeps on climbing and he sneaks slowly and quietly until he has the squirrel trapped. Then the squirrel feels something at his feet and the shadow grows all over his head he barely has time to turn around to check if he is thinking right. The death blow occurs.